The Firefly Lord

Chapter 1- Page 6
July 1st, 2007, 4:38 pm

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three
Posted by three
July 1st, 2007, 4:42 pm
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I'm sorta iffy on how this page turned out. I over did it a little on the toning. and got kind of sloppy in some parts >_> Plus, I haven't actual had the chance to really think about Edward's physical appearence yet, so drawing him in the first panel was kind difficult.

I'll be the first to admit that it shouldn't say 'gas' on the thingy, seing as this story takes place in rural China, so it should be in Chinese. To tell you the truth, I have never been to China before, so I have no clue what the landscape is like there. I can't image it being all too different from Canada, except maybe not as cold. If somebody here has been to China before, can you please send me pics? Thanks.

Tones from psychobob.


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Ness
Posted by Ness
July 1st, 2007, 9:44 pm
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Hey, you actually went ahead and worked on the story! :) I remember you posting the premise on the forums. Great job so far, I'm loving it, and craving for more!



Nice-

projectheart
Posted by projectheart
July 4th, 2007, 8:48 am
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Actually the toning isnt bad, way better than mine ^.^ I'm really intrigued as to how your story will turn out!



three
Posted by three
July 4th, 2007, 5:01 pm
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Ness- I'm suprised you remembered! XD

PH- Thank you ^_^



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