Chapter 1- Page 11 |
 5.00 |
|||
 |
 |
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
Author's Comments:
Tones from: http://psychobob.xepher.net/screentonez/
I'm sort of 'meh' on how this comic turned out. I mean, the drawing is fine and everything (except for Hero in the first panel, I sort of messed him up), but is just doesn't seem...dynamic enough. Plus I got lazy with the toning. Again.
I realize that I am going to have to go back and rewrite a couple pages because of errors in setting, because: A) the story takes place in the seventies, but I accidentally let a reference to game boys and the discovery chanel slip in, and B) because I just found out that they use the yen currency in Japan, not China. Yeah, I'm stupid.
Actually, they're just a bunch of Chinese-looking scribbles :3 *doesn't speak a word of Chinese* But yeah, that's probably what it would say XD
Reader's Comments:
I don't understand Chinese/Japanese (wherever this takes place in) yet it's pretty obvious that says "This side up" XD